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Artist's Comments =filthyhandss Original can be found here. Just a little tribute to the lovely and talented Brittney Rench.  She takes some pretty amazing pictures, and her story is heartwarming.  Tools!!  6B, 4B, B, F, H, 2H, and 4H pencils. Ruler. Eraser. Patience. Music.Let me know what you guys think! ^^  Comments
 awesome drawing!!
I love it! -- ~Quotes~ "Life is a drama you cannot escape" "I remember when I was 5 and despair and tragedy meant you reached for the purple crayon and turns out it was blue" "OHMYGOD! We are sooo retarded....." "Self esteem is SO last year" ^-^
your welcome!!-- ~Quotes~ "Life is a drama you cannot escape" "I remember when I was 5 and despair and tragedy meant you reached for the purple crayon and turns out it was blue" "OHMYGOD! We are sooo retarded....." "Self esteem is SO last year"  Very beautiful darling!
 Want me to critique it?  -- I know you want what's on my mind I know you like what's on my mind I know what eats you up inside I know you know, you know Sex Type Thing - Stone Temple Pilots  great drawing. reminds me of something mary englebright'ish
--  A good painting makes people say “yes that’s nice”. A great painting makes the person see what that artist sees, hear what that artist hears and, feel what that artist feels.  TheArtsClub Thanks!!
...I wouldn't know if that's a good or bad thing because I have no idea who that is!!  -- ...in bed.  ~*~My Gallery~*~     My everything lol it's a children's book illustrator. She very whimsical and her faces on her characters look a lot like what you drew. it really is a good thing lol.
-- A good painting makes people say “yes that’s nice”. A great painting makes the person see what that artist sees, hear what that artist hears and, feel what that artist feels. TheArtsClub |
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You did an amazing job, but I do have to agree, you did make the face a little to wide, but other than that it is absolutely flawless.
I am completely and truly honored to have been drawn by such an amazing artist as yourself!
I love the eyes, I love the glasses, I love the nose I love the hair, I love the writing, I love your work.
Thank you so much, for taking the time and having the patience to draw me, I am now going to feature it in my journal thanks again!
First thing I notice, her face is far too wide. Her right eye (the one at the left on the drawing) should only be approximately an iris-length away from the side of the face and the other eye should be about 3/4ths of an eye-length from the edge. In realism, it's a good idea to use facial features as units of measurement when you draw to keep the proportions right.
Her chin and nose are slightly too small. Notice the right side of the drawn nose in the reference is lined up with the center of her pupil?
When you finish a drawing like this, be sure to go back and re-define all of the lines. For example, her lips could use some thin wrinkle lines for more of a realistic effect as well as the opening to the mouth could use some darkness. Also, I notice that you used the eraser for the highlights in the hair, but don't forget that it is a good idea to use a darker pencil to make the shadows and increase the depth.
Last but not least, use a ruler when drawing text straight.
Very nice job! You're really improving your realism technique!
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